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[entelein]

Sour Mentos, I am sure, must be good when they're not stale.

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[thajinx.livejournal.com]

That sounds reasonable.

MSN is being a jerk right now, just so you know. When I try to connect, it fails and kills my entire connection, so boo.

[entelein.livejournal.com]

Fie! Fie on MSN! Does the webmessenger work?

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Fie on M-S-N!
Does the web messenger work?
Sounds reasonable.

[avatrix.livejournal.com]

Are Sour Mentos, when fresh, actually still the Fresh Maker?

[entelein.livejournal.com]

I got some guys to move my car after eating some, so yes!

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Stale Mentos:
Still the Fresh Maker,
though not good.

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Fresh Maker:
Can Sour Mentos be,
though stale?

[brendanwishes.livejournal.com]

I don't know. I am not inclined to believe in Sour Mentos. But get down with your bad self, I guess.

[k-sui.livejournal.com]

That just begs for haiku-ization, no?

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Say, I was just thinking the same thing...

Let's give it a try, shall we, then?

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

These Sour Mentos:
I am sure they must be good
when they're not stale.

[k-sui.livejournal.com]

stale Sour Mentos
argh! not again! ptooey!
wash my mouth out quick

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

When they're not stale
Sour mentos, I am sure
must be very good.

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

(Can you count "stale" and "sour" as single syllables?)

When not stale
Sour Mentos, I'm sure
must be good.

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

If so, then we can also get

Sour Mentos,
I'm sure, must be good
when not stale.

[thajinx.livejournal.com]

What the freaking hell?
You're writing candy haiku?
You're goddamn crazy.

[avatrix.livejournal.com]

What is this 'crazy'?
Is it wrong to enjoy sweets
and write poems too?

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Consumed stale and sour,
Even sweets and poems are
Unpalatable!

Re: candy-ku

[shad-0.livejournal.com]

Mentos may be "sweets"
Whether Sour Mentos are
Is debatable



N.B. I believe "sour" to be bisyllabic. In the event that this belief is determined to be erroneous, simply insert the word "But" at the beginning of the second line. Thank you.

Re: candy-ku

[dorkmaster-san.livejournal.com]

I met a Bi-Syllabic chick once. She was hawt.

(Sorry, I just HAD to. It made me giggle.)

Re: candy-ku

[avatrix.livejournal.com]

Sour or sweet, we still
call them candy. And candy is
ripe for candy-ku

[clayfoot.livejournal.com]

Crazy we may be,
Yet Sour Mentos we'll not eat
After they turn stale.

[vectorb.livejournal.com]

candy-ku will rule
a new form has arisen
kid form of barku

[entelein.livejournal.com]

omg candy-ku. I must commission you to bind a book for me that is very Hello Kitty, and it will be a candy-ku book.

What say you?

[vectorb.livejournal.com]

thats possable...but where will I get the Kitty to skin for the cover?

[dancingkids.livejournal.com]

ask phaedra to dream one up for you

[vectorb.livejournal.com]

But then it would turn into a snake and try to shower with you.